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Anb nt Ana Taw by ~Emuishere:iconEmuishere:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Fixed


The wind emerges
From its cold hard den
It encounters a leaf
The dance begins then

It all started well
Twirling in the air
Such a long time passed
They were quite a pair

Then the leaf flew back
Turning from the wind
Blind towards the effort
The winds patience thinned

It changed direction
Found another space
The other whirled around
Began to retrace

Bantered behind trees
The leaf made a strike
At that point in time
They were not alike

Flitting together
A weak deal was made
Once that was over
The wind backed away
©2008 ~Emuishere
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The title translates from Kemetic to 'Dance of Leaf and Wind'. It really should be written like this: ȧnb nt ȧnȧ ṯȝw
But only 30 characters can be used in the title, so the coding is too long.

There is a word missing because there is no 'and' in Egpytian.
This is my third attempt at this idea, and I think I'm finally happy with it :)
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~Emuishere:iconEmuishere: Apr 15, 2008, 2:34:42 AM
thanks! :)

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“And so the lion fell in love with the lamb…” he murmured.
I looked away, hiding my eyes as I thrilled to the word.
“What a stupid lamb,” I sighed.
“What a sick, masochistic lion.”

~Twilight, Stephenie Meyer
~AllElseFails-x:iconAllElseFails-x: Apr 15, 2008, 8:50:59 PM
its very nice.
next time i see a leaf in the air, i'll think of this poem :)
~Emuishere:iconEmuishere: Apr 16, 2008, 2:21:03 AM
aw thankyou! :)

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“And so the lion fell in love with the lamb…” he murmured.
I looked away, hiding my eyes as I thrilled to the word.
“What a stupid lamb,” I sighed.
“What a sick, masochistic lion.”

~Twilight, Stephenie Meyer
~maycelestia:iconmaycelestia: Apr 22, 2008, 10:37:33 PM
a) Wow title O_O you're so smart.
b) nice poem, I like the last... bit... best. (verse? stanza?) fits well, it's windy outside today.
~Emuishere:iconEmuishere: Apr 24, 2008, 2:20:03 AM
aww thanks! :heart:
thanks so much! i was really unsure about the last part, i'm glad you like it :)

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“And so the lion fell in love with the lamb…” he murmured.
I looked away, hiding my eyes as I thrilled to the word.
“What a stupid lamb,” I sighed.
“What a sick, masochistic lion.”

~Twilight, Stephenie Meyer
~animeMADme:iconanimeMADme: Apr 28, 2008, 10:06:19 AM
IT IS TEH AWESOMENESS. 8D

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~Emuishere:iconEmuishere: Apr 28, 2008, 4:45:32 PM
aww lol thankyou! :glomp:

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“And so the lion fell in love with the lamb…” he murmured.
I looked away, hiding my eyes as I thrilled to the word.
“What a stupid lamb,” I sighed.
“What a sick, masochistic lion.”

~Twilight, Stephenie Meyer
~animeMADme:iconanimeMADme: May 20, 2008, 8:43:30 AM
Np. 8D :hug:

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:damphyr: animeMADme` <3333
Cosplay <3 anime <3 manga <3 = :heart::heart:
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